User talk:Jcastro ethics/sandbox

Jcastro,

I like how you've decided to add the three views on abortion to the article since the article at the moment goes into detail about specific branches and sects of Christianity view the topic; it think it is nice to have a good background on the three main views on abortion that there are. I think you've written in your sandbox well and it sound unbiased which is good. I would just suggest trying to make sure the tone of the article matches what you're going to add to the article. In addition, are there any citations that could be added to what you have written? I do not see any in your draft, but where are you getting this information from so that if someone reading the article would want to verify or gather more information on the topic they could do so through citations. Bdevalk (talk) 03:27, 12 November 2016 (UTC)Bdevalk