User talk:Jcbarron24/sandbox

Week 11 - Peer Review by Elizabeth Dollmont
Overall this is a really interesting article to choose and the original stub you're expanding on has some very good information in it, however, there are not a lot of sources. I think you could add more sources when you go to add your own contributions to the article. When you bring up the terms like probrachiator and semibrachiator you should elaborate on the definitions of those terms. Maybe it would be better to change your sentence where you state that these terms "have fallen out of favor within the scientific community.", as it slightly strays from the neural appearance that Wiki looks for in articles. It is very good that you added sections on the types and models of brachiation, as these sections really help to give the reader a grasp on how and what this behaviour is. When you state the "additional fact" of "Gibbons use brachiation as their main form of locomotion as they use this type for gait in 80% of their locomotor activities, compared to the African Apes who only use brachiation for less than 5% of their locomotor activities." you should add a source. Your section for the evolution is blank but I think it is an important to your article. You could also add a section on how this develops in species throughout their lifetime. Your additions provide very good explanation about the behavioral components of brachiation and I look forward to the finished product!