User talk:Jchoii97/Cultural interest fraternities and sororities

Hi Jchoii97,

I just completed a peer review for the article you've been working on. Here is the link. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jchoii97/Cultural_interest_fraternities_and_sororities/Sihern_Han_Peer_Review

Best, Sihern Han

Pre-move Review
Hello, I looked over your article history and noticed that you haven't done much. The paragraph you added is fine, and you can go ahead and move it over. However, we were expecting a bit more material for this assignment. Also, you used external links for the National APIDA Panhellenic Association. These belong in an "External links" section. If you think that the organization should have it's own article, then feel free to turn the name into an internal link. "Red links" aka missing topics, are fine if there is a reason for the page to exist.

To move your content to the live article, please review the detailed explanation of the process on our class wiki.

Here are a few suggestions that most of the class' articles have room to improve upon. They may not all apply to your article and don't worry if they aren't all done, but these features can really make your additions shine:


 * Refine the paragraph above the Table of Contents, remember it is the first thing that will be read. Considering adding a short description using this template.
 * Find and add some relevant images. To make sure that you have permission to use the images, please review the WikiEdu module and read the Guide to Illustrating Wikipedia.
 * Add a "See also" section of related articles by creating the heading and adding a list of internal links. Also consider adding a "External links" section, if there is somewhere relevant to link to.
 * Try to find a relevant infobox or fill-in more details for the pre-existing one.
 * Try to find any relevant category templates and WikiProjects. Often these were found at the bottom of the original article or on its "Talk page".
 * Try to find more citations to add as references. Also, make sure to add them correcly and re-use instead of duplicate. Having a wide variety of sources can be just as important as the number.
 * Clean up formatting and use some of the "wiki features". For instance, look for lists that could be sub headers, add internal links to places and concepts that readers may want more information about, consider whether "article elements" (e.g. infobox, table of contents, categories) are in the recommended order.
 * Do some copy-editing. For instance, look for extra paragaphs and whitespace, inconsistent citation placement, extra periods, typos, etc.
 * Review the WikiEdu Editing Guide and see if anything else stands out.

Let me know if you have any questions. 一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙‍♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 05:29, 13 February 2020 (UTC)