User talk:Jcmoss8917/sandbox

Empress's Peer Review
Overall, you are off to a great start. I love the facts you have incorporated in the Mao Zedong article. I would fix some of your sentence fluency. Such as, when you list off calculations of deaths, I would just start off with "different researchers have established calculations ranging from 32.5 million to 45 million deaths."

Jcmoss8917 Peer review
I like how you have the numbers down for your article but it would help if you had a summary on what your topic was about. I could go look this up but it would be helpful to already know about it in your words.Anabelleb50 (talk) 15:39, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

Response to Peer Review
Peer reviews have been taken into consideration, and my article has been published. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jcmoss8917 (talk • contribs) 05:16, 1 December 2018 (UTC)