User talk:Jcrank07/sandbox

Hey there! So far this page seems to be well on its way of being very informative. I liked how simple and easy it is to go through the page and read over the sections. The only suggestion I can make, which you yourself already pointed out, is finding more recent research articles and the mechanism of how it works. Other than that, it looks great! Janki Patel

Add more to the abstract. Your symptoms are very clear and concise, good job on this section. You have a good start on causes and prevention. I would go a little more in depth with the diagnosis portion. Try and explain the process more. Make sure you identify all of the possible treatment options. I really like that you have a "related conditions" section in order to clarify. Overall, this is a very good start to you wiki page! Good job. Eleni Kouimelis. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ekouimelis (talk • contribs) 18:05, 14 November 2017 (UTC)

You have a goo start to your page. The flow and outline you have so far is good and makes it easy to follow and read. I would add more to the abstract as well. The related condistions I feel like you could add to the causes on the sections. I know you're still working on soem sections, but it seems liek you have a handle on everything. If you can elaborate more on diagnosis that would help because it is kind of short. --- Neal Patel — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nealhp427 (talk • contribs) 20:39, 14 November 2017 (UTC)

Sweiner02 (talk) 20:10, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Abstract needs fleshing out. Should reflect all major sections.
 * If you need help finding what's out there on mechanism, come see me
 * Make sure your citations and links are frequent and consistent.
 * You do have some mechanism information from the causes that you can work with.
 * What clinical findings on physical exam?
 * Obviously a few sections are basically not started. If you need help finding things, come see me.
 * did some edits, hope this helps--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 13:24, 5 March 2018 (UTC)