User talk:Jcu6/sandbox

Tone
The tone is good. Your content fits in well with the information on the live page. You need to cite your sentences properly, look here for that. Bryantlib (talk) 16:11, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

Before making the paragraph 'live'
Remember to work with group members when uploading to the live page to ensure you dont upload the same information. Also consider how you will insert your information into the existing cider page. You may have to break up your sentences or not include everything depending on the information that is already on the page.

PROOFREAD your paragraph before you make your information 'live'.

Before you post make sure one person in your group created a new section on the Cider apple talk page you are uploading to, letting the people watching the page know you are making edits. And also make sure you summarize your final change, when submitting to the live page. If you don't remember how to do these steps, re-watch the tutorial. :)Bryantlib (talk) 16:17, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

style and tone
Also, remember that you are targeting an international audience. If you include information that is specific to the U.S., then you should consider adding examples from other countries. Ciderprof1 (talk) 16:27, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

content
You should include 3-5 references in your paragraph.

The current US TTB code allows for cider to be labelled as such up to 8.5% ABV. Ciderprof1 (talk) 16:27, 7 May 2018 (UTC)