User talk:Jcudi/sandbox

JCudi, I would say that you are just missing some punctuation to separate ideas and sentences, but over all good job! And keep going.

I think you have pretty good information that you can add to the article. But I don't see any sources. I think you should just add multiple sources so your information can be considered reliable. Other than the sources, you have few grammar mistakes but you're doing great! - Anna — Preceding unsigned comment added by Annamuzaffar (talk • contribs) 15:49, 26 April 2017 (UTC)