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Thorough evaluation. Did you think of any specific changes you might make to either article? Jmmcabee (talk) 15:32, 19 April 2017 (UTC)jmmcabee

Comments on Ideas Draft
Nice analysis. Did you also look at the talk pages of either article. I agree that there are probably many other useful sources for thermotropism. It looks like you found one. I'm also wondering if there are other terms that could be used to describe the phenomenon of thermotropism. For thigmotropism, it does sound like there is a lot of editing that could be done. Your sample sentence is about fungi and probably wouldn't stand on its own. Linking elongation to thigmotropism would be necessary, but maybe that sentence fits somewhere else in the article already. Jmmcabee (talk) 18:30, 26 April 2017 (UTC)jmmcabee

Comments on Article Revision
This looks great! Nice job with updating the citations. You do want to go through and make sure that your language is as neutral and precise as possible. If you're unsure, I can give you more specifics. It looks like you're adding a section. Make sure that the overall organization of the article still makes sense in terms of where you place the new section. Jmmcabee (talk) 20:19, 10 May 2017 (UTC)jmmcabee

The physiological factor article was a nice touch. It explained a lot of the mechanisms and gave a clearly picture. Throughout the article, it was clear, neutral and there were no outlining distractions. I would suggest linking some words like phototropism, thigmotropic, etc.… Daniel Seo94