User talk:Jcwikman/talk page tutorial

Hello
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 * Hi! Can you give me any advice for improving this article?--Jcwikman (talk) 02:10, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review
Originially posted on the article talk page, moving the peer review here:

I liked the overall flow of the article. Very informative, but not too much where it'd be dull for a non scientific reader. Its precise and to the point for the most part. It would be easier to follow sources if you added inline citations. They would also be visible at the bottom of the article. I noticed there was one where you had listed "citation needed" as well. Other than that the information is great, and the overall structure of the article has a really smooth flow to it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dawood34 (talk • contribs) 22:42, 28 May 2017 (UTC)