User talk:Jdorian23/sandbox

It has a good base, cited properly, and well worded. Just a couple of hiccups in the article draft. I noticed that artist, and artists is spelled wrong so that is something to change. Explaining Johnstown was well put, especially in the usage of the topics. With the mix of what events there are, using crime is a good way to show neutral point of view. Also, I noticed that you misspelled Amateur a couple of times. In the events section, it was cool to put in the golf tournament, a music festival, and a baseball tournament. One thing to maybe add is Pitt Johnstown and its success in the community, as it improves the economy and brings a crowd of people to the city. In the crime section, when you used the rate of rapes and murders, maybe put what year that was accounted for to help the reader.