User talk:Jeanetteyoffe

== Your submission at Articles for creation: Understanding the Transition from Foster Care to Adoption: From a Personal and Professional Perspective by Jeanette Yoffe, M.A., M.F.T. (August 6) ==  Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dan arndt was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Dan arndt (talk) 00:59, 6 August 2019 (UTC)

== Your submission at Articles for creation: Understanding the Transition from Foster Care to Adoption: From a Personal and Professional Perspective by Jeanette Yoffe, M.A., M.F.T. (August 6) ==  Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User:Jeanetteyoffe/sandbox/Understanding_the_Transition_from_Foster_Care_to_Adoption:_From_a_Personal_and_Professional_Perspective_by_Jeanette_Yoffe,_M.A.,_M.F.T. Articles for creation help desk] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Bilorv was: This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: This is still fundamentally an essay rather than a Wikipedia article (see WP:NOTESSAY and WP:NPOV). The first sentence - "The transition from foster care to adoption can be very difficult for a child and there are many challenges to take into consideration" - is already value-laden and non-neutral. This is simply not the right tone for Wikipedia - please take some time to look at some featured articles in the same field (e.g. Reactive attachment disorder) to see the style we require.

— Bilorv ( talk ) 07:47, 6 August 2019 (UTC)

User:Jeanetteyoffe/sandbox/Understanding the Transition from Foster Care to Adoption: From a Personal and Professional Perspective by Jeanette Yoffe, M.A., M.F.T.


Hello, Jeanetteyoffe. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, User:Jeanetteyoffe/sandbox/Understanding the Transition from Foster Care to Adoption: From a Personal and Professional Perspective by Jeanette Yoffe, M.A., M.F.T..

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it. —&thinsp;JJMC89&thinsp; (T·C) 03:39, 11 February 2020 (UTC)