User talk:Jeanetttee

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Hello, Jeanetttee, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Comments
Good start, Jeanetttee. I have a few questions for you to consider as you revise: 1) Do both of the lines you propose adding belong in the lead? I encourage you to review the description of what makes for a good lead before answering this. 2) Is this information already addressed elsewhere in the article and might this material be used to strengthen the section that already addresses the issue? 3) Are there other bits from the three articles that you studied that are not yet covered here or that would update other information in the article? Finally, as you revise, be sure to check for typos. --Jbdolphin (talk) 05:31, 11 May 2021 (UTC)