User talk:Jeannie Fung

Sharing ERP implementation experience
Hello Jeannie Fung, welcome to Wikipedia and thanks for getting involved with the Enterprise resource planning article. I'm writing to let you know that in its current form your contribution conflicts with some of the fundamental principles by which Wikipedia operates, in particular that content should be verifiable with citations to reliable sources, and that articles should present a neutral point of view, not promoting any single point of view as "the truth" or "the best view". As you have added a new (large) section without any references, there's obviously a problem reconciling your contribution with our sources principle. Looking more deeply, you seem to be promoting some points of view while ignoring others: e.g. in "Business Processes" you say "Either changing your existing process to match the ERP system or implement your business process to follow the ERP standard can be difficult", but you don't mention changing the ERP system's default process ...which is an option the end-user organization will always want to examine. I think you need to take a fresh look at your edits to see whether you can find the necessary citations and re-build them around a more neutral narrative that reflects the broad trend in systems thinking that has evolved over at least twenty years. I've deleted your text from the current version of the article but you can still find it here. - Pointillist (talk) 22:55, 4 January 2010 (UTC)