User talk:JedMatias

Welcome!
Hello, JedMatias, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Brianda and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Sourcing and writing style for Phillipines and the World Bank
Hi @JedMatias, I checked out your edits for the Philippines and the World Bank article, and have some feedback to improve your contributions about the sourcing. Since the topic of the article is the World Bank, then it's not appropriate to use them as a reliable source when writing about the WB itself. This means your writing for Wikipedia needs to summarize what independent, reliable, secondary sources have said about a topic, so that a Wikipedia reader can get a balanced, neutral overview of the current thoughts and understanding of that topic. The balanced point of view is especially important in this case bc if you a look, the World Bank has its set of controversies.

Remember, the goal is to provide a neutral, fact based summary of the topic at hand based off the reliable sources you've found. In one case you wrote, "It will also improve the conditions of the fishermen..." In an encyclopedia, we want to know what actually happened, what reliable newspapers or academic journals reported on these projects.

I suggest you edit the contributions so that they supported by independent, reliable, secondary sources. Check out this training module on a refresher on sources. If you have any questions, please feel free to reach out. Looping in @Bergmanucsd Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:39, 31 July 2023 (UTC)