User talk:Jed Sears

Ways to improve Henry Sears (architect)
Hello, Jed Sears,

Thank you for creating Henry Sears (architect).

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

"Consider shortening the lead and moving some of that into an introductory, background, or history section."

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FULBERT (talk) 13:50, 9 September 2019 (UTC)

Career Section Change
Hi there, thank you so much for your feedback. I'm new to Wikipedia, so it is much appreciated. I have shortened the lead by adding a career section. I'm wondering if that would also fulfill the issue of dividing the page into further sections and if it would now be appropriate to remove that specific issue.

Thanks

Jed Sears (talk) 01:46, 10 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Welcome to Wikipedia. Thanks for the additional work on this article, Jed Sears. I think the lead and sections are now in better balance so removed that tag. --- FULBERT (talk) 02:28, 10 September 2019 (UTC)