User talk:Jedidiah.e.obomighie/sandbox

Lead Section Comments:
 * I think you gave a good description of what the overall test is about
 * I like that you added steps and a process for how the general sense of the test works
 * This section could be expanded by listing other contributing scientists and methods for the test\
 * Add more detail/background. It was on the shorter side
 * Good sources

Lead section comments for Jordan Port:
 * The description about what the topic was direct and to the point.
 * You gave ways in which the test could be presented to the subject.
 * There were no paragraphs which I think could be added to give the lead section a better presentation.
 * I believe more points could be added to the section. The section was a bit too short and the information given wasn't enough.Jedidiah.e.obomighie (talk) 10:05, 30 October 2018 (UTC)

Feedback
Nice work. A few final fixes
 * The year on the Edward Thorndike ref (#5) is 190. I think you're missing a digit :)
 * Bold the article title, and nothing else. Only use italics for things like book titles.
 * Add some links to other articles - terms or people that the average user might be unfamiliar with the first time they appear should be bolded.
 * Only capitalize proper nouns. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:02, 7 December 2018 (UTC)