User talk:Jeff $essions/sandbox

Thanks for starting the article evaluation, but it needs more information, discussion, and context here. BootsGordon (talk) 14:05, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

Rebecca Savinsky peer review
I think that you did a very good job at clearly explaining and listing what you are going to add to the article and provided and easy way for people to understand how the process works. I think this is a good amount of information to add as well, you're not condensing it down too much but you're not long winded either. Rsavinsky (talk) 18:06, 10 October 2018 (UTC) Rsavinsky

/* Peer Review (James Hajek) */
I'm just giving you a review of what I see. If it were me, I would give some examples; or context, to give the page and reader more of an understanding. Jdhajek (talk) 03:05, 11 October 2018 (UTC)

JaLynn's peer review
In-text citations in the 1st paragraph? You should provide links or explanations to conditional pardon and commutation of sentence. Try to add a little more context in the history so readers can have a better understanding without having to visit other sources.