User talk:Jeff Longley

Recent edit to Patrick Crayton
Welcome, and thank you for your attempt to lighten up Wikipedia. However, this is an encyclopedia and the articles are intended to be serious, so please don't make joke edits as you did to Patrick Crayton. Readers looking for accurate information will not find them amusing. If you'd like to experiment with editing, try the sandbox, where you are given a good deal of freedom in what you write. Thank you!  Bfpage &#124;leave a message 01:42, 26 February 2015 (UTC)

Recent edit to Patrick Crayton
Hello. I noticed that you made an edit that introduces praise or promotional language to the Patrick Crayton article. On Wikipedia, we adhere to a neutral point of view (NPOV) and avoid promotional language or puffery,i.e. 'crucial'. Please read the NPOV policy page, as well as this page of language to avoid to better understand how to expand this article in a style suitable to an encyclopedia. If you have questions, please see the Help Desk page. Thank you!  Bfpage &#124;leave a message 01:50, 26 February 2015 (UTC)