User talk:Jeffrey.stottlemyer

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Response from Deb (talk) 13:09, 24 February 2013 (UTC) below.


 * Hi. I've had a look at the proposed new article following the rather brusque rejection by my fellow-contributor.  I would advise reading Notability (music) to give you an idea why a band needs to meet certain criteria to be the subject of an article.  The article is also worded in such a way as to suggest that it's been written for promotional purposes.  I don't blame anyone for trying to get their favourite projects included in wikipedia, but advertising is definitely out (see []), and phrases such as "Allah-Las quickly developed a reputation for their dedication to perfecting a recorded sound and live presentation true to their musical roots" are highly subjective and contribute to this impression.  Also, take care on Conflict of interest. I'm not suggesting that you are a member of this band, but it is as well to be sure you are not crossing the boundary.  Does this help? Deb (talk) 13:09, 24 February 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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