User talk:Jeibeas/sandbox

TA Comments:

In-text citations: none

Professional tone: yes

Paraphrasing real science: This is still a purely biographical section. For full credit, the TAs had instructed that those with biography heavy sections must assist with a research based section.

Grammar and spelling: overall good

Links to other wiki articles: none

Score: 11/20

RIST, AUSTIN Peer Review Score: 0/20