User talk:Jejeni6/sandbox

Hey Jejeni, I had a quick read over your page and it looks really good! The flow of information is quite logical and nicely organized. The first thing I did notice was your referencing, I think a few are missing? The second paragraph has ideas that seem to be from different sources. And the referencing itself, it's nice you have them after every sentence, but I think it'd be okay if you referenced it once at the end if the source is the same for a few sentences. cheers! D.jae.lee (talk) 10:18, 2 March 2015 (UTC)