User talk:Jenchayk/sandbox2

1) In the Jordan Nolan article everything that is discussed is relevant to to Nolan. There was no information that stuck out to me or distracted me, it was all very relevant to his life.

2) All the information that is posted in the article is very neutral. As an athlete's article, it would be quite easy to make claims or frames that appear heavily biased toward a particular position based on team or athlete preference.  However, the article on Nolan is very neutral and not biased in anyway.

3) The article is pretty good and representing all the aspects of Jordan Nolan. His hockey career is quite overrepresented in the article, but he is a professional hockey player and therefore it is logical that the majority of his article about his hockey career.  His early life and childhood growing up as an indigenous athlete is underrepresented and it would be great to add that information.   Jenchayk (talk) 21:17, 18 March 2018 (UTC)