User talk:Jenjen731/sandbox

=Evaluations=

10/15/2018 Evaluation by Emanel2
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 * Points:38.5/40
 * Grade: 96%

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Nearly meets standard 1. The word "presented" needs to be spelled correctly in the sentence: "A modest plan with sketches was presetned in the 1430s..." 2. "Saint-Maclou The Saint-Maclou was influenced by Rouen architecture of the late 13th century and early 14th century." (In this sentence, maybe take out the first part "Saint-Maclou" because it seems like it is being repeated twice). 3. "Saint-Ouen The abbey church was reconstructed in 1318-1339 by Jean Roussel." (In this sentence, maybe write it this way "The Saint-Ouen Abbey church was reconstructed...")("Abbey Church" should be capitalized).

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Nearly meets standard There should be three high-quality sources for this assignment, but there are only two. Since three examples of notable works are listed in the second sentence, three of them need to be presented in the sentences later on. Adding information about the Rouen Cathedral would provide a more sense of completion.

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10/16/2018 Evaluation by kkatiekrue

 * Points: 35.5
 * Grade: 89%

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Standards Little typo on "presented" in the first line

Language
Nearly Meets Standards 1)You might consider revising the hyperlink for St. Ouen to exclude the ", Rouen". It seems that the title of the church doesn't include Rouen. 2) I see where you're going with bolding the name of the church and then launching into the description. Is there a way to more clearly separate Saint-Maclou from The Saint-Maclou? Don't get me wrong, I like saying it twice in a row but it reads a little repetetive. 3) "Verified by written sources" sounds very mysterious, is there any way to reference specific sources?

Organization
Meets Standards I think if you mention Rouen Cathedral, it would be a good idea for a little blurb on it. If it's too much, might just delete reference to it in your first line.

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Spelling/Grammar
Meets Expectations The word "presented" is spelled, "presetned."

Language
Meets Expectations The section talking about the sketches for Saint-Maclou could possibly be re-worded: "...designer desired a much grander design" sounds very alliterative when maybe you could change it up just a little bit. In the sentence about transepts, you could go into more detail to define what a transept is and maybe expand on that section to make it more clear.

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10/17/2018 Evaluation by Benjamin Pocheron

 * Points: 31/40
 * Grade: 77.5%

Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard Typo and "presented".

Language
Nearly meets standard "verified by written sources shouldn't be there. References are your proof".

Organization
Meets standard Great job having headers and bold texts. However, careful, Saint Maclou and Saint Ouen are towns as well. Please consider bolding Saint-Maclou Church and not Saint Maclou only. Same thing with Saint-Ouen Does it make sense?

Coding
Exceeds standard You seem to have understood how Wikipedia works.

Validity
Nearly meets standard Good beginning. I was hoping more information.

Completion
Standard? You talk about Rouen Cathedrale without having a paragraph on it. If it was too much information to pull out, just delete this example. :) Also, your main headline is "Architecture of Rouen" and only churches are mentioned. What about the town, houses, streets, the urban side of the town?

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11/16/2018 Evaluation by Benjamin Pocheron

 * Points: 37/40
 * Grade: 92.5%

Spelling/Grammar
Nearly Meets standard (3) Some typos, such as "Girondins de Bourdeaux", instead of "Bordeaux".

Language
Nearly Meets standard (3) Some sentences could be better said. Maybe use either parenthesis or italic when writing the French teams, for example?

Organization
Nearly Meets standard (3) Maybe have sub-headers for the different types of sports. You have content and multiple paragraphs, but I believe that the little paragraphs might be too short to be real paragraphs.

Coding
Meets standard (4)

Validity
Meets standard (4) Information seem correct and up to date.

Completion
Meets standard (4)

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Meets standard (4)