User talk:Jenn12xx

Ways to improve Joyce Linehan
Hi, I'm Snickers2686. Jenn12xx, thanks for creating Joyce Linehan!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. Hi! This is a decent start to a biographical article. Perhaps if you could break it up into smaller sections/paragraphs to make it easier to read. It seems to have a little too much of a personal connection, be sure to maintain a neutral point of view when adding information and remember to cite sources, the more the better. Good luck!

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.

Snickers2686 (talk) 17:26, 22 April 2017 (UTC)