User talk:Jennac1117/sandbox

Hi Jenna, A good start on your draft planned for the pain management in children article. Though it will be essential to add some new material (as you have planned) I also think a big piece of working on this article is evaluating (and hopefully improving) its organizational arrangement. The current article doesn't seem to follow a clear information hierarchy, and have a logical pathway from top to bottom. If you want to discuss strategies for doing that, let me know! I think, for example, that all of the pharma info should appear earlier in the piece.Amyc29 (talk) 03:48, 25 February 2018 (UTC)