User talk:Jennagilbert/sandbox

Good start. Before you go start editing your writing to perfection, let's get some more detail, description and citations. I've also included questions about further work. Nancy Andrews (talk) 13:08, 25 February 2016 (UTC) --

Jenna, Your last three citations are strange because they are direct quotes, but when you go to the links you don't see those quotes. Also, you would still need to say who said those things. For example: Jim Smith, the book reviewer for the Los Angeles Times said the book was "quote" then cite.

Also, Your third citation from the end says it is an aperture link, but it is an Amazon link. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Marykay7 (talk • contribs) 23:25, 12 March 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the improvements, but the question about the book reviews is an important one and MUST be addressed prior to publication. The body of the article is full of good info, a little repetitive at times, but as an editor I'd rather have that to work with rather than too little. We can do the final editing in the merging of this article with the existing article on Ryan. Nancy Andrews (talk) 13:41, 5 April 2016 (UTC)