User talk:Jennifer.cornejomarquez

Welcome!
Hello, Jennifer.cornejomarquez, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Tone of articles
Hallo Jennifer and welcome to Wikipedia. I see that you have edited Kayla Barron. Please note that words like "Kayla Barron was just a regular girl with a big dream." are not appropriate for an international encyclopedia. This article currently reads like something from a gossip magazine. I see that you are editing as part of a student project, so I'm not going to spend a lot of time cleaning it up (though I've fixed a few things already). Please revisit the article and trim it to hard facts. Thanks. ( for info) Pam  D  07:22, 10 May 2018 (UTC)