User talk:Jenny1620/sandbox

The added information about the dissociation difference between genders was an interesting and appropriate addition. I noticed that there are a few topics mentioned in the article (e.g. somatization, interpersonal dysfunction) that you could add links to in order to explain what they are. I also noticed that the article is completely missing a "Treatment" section, so if you could find some reliable sources regarding that I think it would be a great addition. You're doing great!Hphilli2 (talk) 01:47, 5 October 2019 (UTC)

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I really liked your word choices as they were very efficient and clear. Something that would be interesting to see in the article is an addition to the effects of psychoactive substances and how or why they induce dissociation and for how long (temporary or permanent). It would also be interesting to know how such drugs effect preexisting dissociation (do they cause it to get worse or do they not do anything to it at all? Why or why not?). Another thing I saw was that in the Trauma section many of the sentences were formatted like stand alone paragraphs. It would be purely aesthetic, but I do think it would look better if they were grouped appropriately in a paragraph.

Megan E Smith (talk) 02:55, 7 October 2019 (UTC)