User talk:Jennyhaley96/sandbox

Hi Jenny! I think that you have a strong start. You're ideas are good, but I noticed some spelling and grammatical errors. Maybe work on the flow of the paragraphs so that this section is easier to understand. Also just add more in general. Keep up the good work!

Herstory1 (talk) 19:59, 8 May 2017 (UTC)Herstory1