User talk:Jeremy Chi/June (singer)

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

In your case, though, it looks like you have made your changes live on Wikipedia. The assignment is to make your changes here in the sandbox so that we can help you to follow Wikipedia policies before the changes go live to the world. Please go ahead and use this sandbox page to make your changes from here on out.

If you look at the history of the article on the live Wikipedia, you'll see that you got some feedback from Wikipedians about your work. Please take their thoughts into account as you are making your changes -- here in the sandbox -- and do talk to us about your article before making changes on the live version of Wikipedia. Kaylea Champion (talk) 22:51, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! As I mentioned on Discord, I took a look at your sandboxes and did a little bit of Google searching. To me, it looks like you chose a topic with very few sources available. It seems like a big challenge to find enough good quality material to improve this article enough that it would satisfy the requirements of the assignment. It is late in the class to make a change, but the purpose of the assignment is to demonstrate that you've learned about Wikipedia's norms and rules. It's up to you, but you might need to pick a new topic in order to be successful in this assignment. Kaylea Champion (talk) 02:48, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi

It looks like you have been trying to put your article live on Wikipedia. However, your article is *not* approved to go live. Please don't make it live until it is approved. If you look at the history tab of the article, you will see that there are quite a few messages from other Wikipedians giving you feedback about your work. Please review what you've heard; finding high quality sources is key.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 05:58, 12 February 2022 (UTC)