User talk:Jeremygantz

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Jeremy, I took a look at City Colleges of Chicago - After reading the edit history, I must remind you that copyright is of paramount importance on Wikipedia. We cannot directly copy from the website, nor can we make small changes to the text and say we have made enough edits. I have restored his version, but I will remove mention of the "Navy Campus"

The other problem is that (even if your version was not derived in any way from the Community College pages) the tone of what you posted sounds too promotional. Please read Tone. It is too much work for the editor community to reshape, and it's easier to rewrite from scratch.

What I will do within the next few days is to show you how a good encyclopedia article is structured and what tone it should use. I want you to learn from example and understand why WhisperToMe (talk) 10:32, 11 September 2012 (UTC)
 * I rewrote the history section, using the history webpage as a source but writing everything completely in my own words. WhisperToMe (talk) 10:59, 11 September 2012 (UTC)