User talk:Jeremyr55/sandbox

Philip's Peer Review
I am peer-reviewing your proposed changes for Languages of the United States

Things I liked: -You have a pretty solid plan for what you are looking to add to the article. -You already have a source picked out to help you add to it

Things that could be improved -Having more than one source will probably be helpful for you -Picking out a specific heading that you want to work on would help to focus your changes. Consider adding information about just one language that you think sound be expanded on. -Think about specifically what you would like to add, especially to where you feel there is misrepresentation.

The most important think I think you can do is focus on one language instead of trying to cover all of them. Your article is a long and well established one, probably best to pick one small part to focus on.

I will definitely consider doing something similar for my article, Ghanaian English. Feel free to give me some feedback as well.

Thanks! Pgdotts (talk) 06:16, 26 March 2018 (UTC)