User talk:JeriHayes

Preview
I would like to thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. However, it is recommended that you use the preview button before you save; this helps you find any errors you have made, and prevents clogging up recent changes and the page history. Thanks again. --Geniac 14:29, 8 November 2006 (UTC)

First article
Hi jeri, I cannot really see too much to criticise about your article. Yours is about as Wikified as some older articles about actors eg. Dudley Moore. Some good article for comparison are Brigitte Bardot and Tom Hanks. In order of priority I would suggest:
 * 1) It would benefit from sub-headings. Reasons:
 * 2) * Automatically creates a table of contents
 * 3) * Organises the text more logically
 * 4) * Casual readers can quickly find what they are looking for without having to read the entire article.
 * 5) Cite references.
 * 6) * Without references your article will not meet the minimum standard.
 * 7) Create lists of works

Just doing these will improve your article immensely.

Good work so far, you're doing very well for someone new to writing encyclopedic entries. It is very different to any other form of writing, and takes some getting used to.

LittleOldMe 13:47, 9 November 2006 (UTC)

Robert Saxon a fan site
Hi Jeri, I don't believe that the person who tagged the article is questioning the article's subject matter, it is more a question of style. Some statements are too effusive for an encyclopedic article. A Wikipedia article should concentrate mainly on verifiable facts, and any opinion is best expressed by quoting from articles or books concerning the subject.

Please do not feel possessive about the article. You have given Wikipedia a good start and hopefully other editors will lend their abilities to improve the article further.

Regards LittleOldMe 12:54, 30 January 2007 (UTC)

Welcome to Wikipedia. It might not have been your intention, but your recent contribution removed content from. Please be more careful when editing articles and do not remove content from Wikipedia without a good reason, which should be specified in the edit summary. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. If you would like to experiment again, please use the sandbox. --Xnuala 02:36, 2 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Hi Jeri, I don't think that the tagging of your article is malicious, but instead it opens up the forum for all Wikipedia users to comment on the article.  If you check out the article's deletion debate you will see some of my advice, which I will send to you later after work (I'm going to be late if I don't get moving!)  If you would like, I can help you with rewriting to give the article a more neutral point of view. --Xnuala 11:47, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

February 2007
Please stop. If you continue to delete or blank page contents or templates from Wikipedia, as you did to Robert Saxon, you will be blocked. → Aza Toth 19:04, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

This is your last warning. The next time you delete or blank page contents or templates from Wikipedia, as you did to Talk:Robert Saxon, you will be blocked. → Aza Toth 19:15, 3 February 2007 (UTC)