User talk:Jerome1919/sandbox

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Drug_policy_reform Jerome1919 (talk) 19:31, 22 October 2015 (UTC) Jerome McQuarter

Cannibis
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Legality_of_cannabis Jerome1919 (talk) 19:41, 22 October 2015 (UTC) Jerome McQuarter

Jerome1919 (talk) 02:40, 23 October 2015 (UTC) Jerome McQuarter

Jerome1919 (talk) 02:40, 23 October 2015 (UTC) Jerome McQuarter

Jerome1919 (talk) 02:40, 23 October 2015 (UTC) Jerome McQuarter

Jerome1919 (talk) 02:40, 23 October 2015 (UTC) Jerome McQuarter


 * Your sources look good, but they should be posted in the sandbox, not the talk page. Josef Horáček (talk) 16:56, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
 * You didn't add the sources to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:51, 3 November 2015 (UTC)

The Lead
I see what you're trying to do with the lead, but it's the wrong approach. Instead of telling us how the information is organized, you should give us the highlights. There needs to be actual substance in the lead. What are the two or three most important facts that we can learn from this article? Josef Horáček (talk) 21:56, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

I understand Mr.Horacek, I will look for some important facts in the article Jerome1919 (talk) 13:21, 4 November 2015 (UTC) Jerome McQuarter


 * I see that you posted the lead, but you didn't make any changes. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:27, 8 November 2015 (UTC)