User talk:Jessbarajas/sandbox

Draft feedback
Hi, Jess!

You've done a really nice job collecting information and tracking your sources carefully, which will be so helpful in putting the final article together. My biggest notes as you revise/continue working on this article are: --focus: be careful to not make this a second "Immigration reform in the United States" article. This should stay focused on the bigger idea of what is immigration reform in general, rather than what does immigration reform look like in a particular country. If you are discussing different general structures immigration reform can take, clear examples of these from various countries could be helpful...you will just want to make sure the bigger picture/ideas of immigration reform remain the focus rather than the ways those conversations/reforms have played out and affected people in one specific country. --sentences. The bullet points are tidy and easy to organize, which can work great for drafting and putting ideas together. As you revise, you will want to created full sentences and paragraphs for most of the sections you are planning to add (lists or tables might make sense for some items, but most will likely be in sentence/paragraph form).

These two things are the biggest items to focus on for grade impact. I hope these notes are helpful, and please let me know if you have any questions! Nicoleccc (talk) 15:51, 6 November 2018 (UTC)