User talk:Jessemerodio/Body culture studies/Leilakinson Peer Review

I like that you brought in the concept of tattoos in body culture and they role they play in aligning ones self with a society. I didn't see any citations in your section and would suggest that you add citations as appropriate. I also would have liked to have heard more about this and suggest you expand on the concept. I also suggest having someone proof read your work for spelling and grammatical soundness.Leilakinson (talk) 04:40, 30 April 2021 (UTC)