User talk:Jessica3840J/Buckeye High School

User:Jessica3840J Finish your article, put up your references. There is good clarification correct wiki markup is correct. Maybe go check the style and grammar page just to make sure everything is correct. Go Bucky the Buck :) Ashley3840J (talk) 16:26, 1 November 2012 (UTC) User:Ashley3840J

Reference where you found your information so whoever is reading your article knows it is "accurate and trustworthy." You're very clear in your writing and your article is easy to understand and follow. Maybe link to a few other pages where you can, such as the sports you have listed or the clubs if they have their own websites or if it is on wikipedia. For example if the term Student Council has it's own wikipedia page, maybe you could link to it or something. Everything else looks good! Stacy3840J (talk) 16:38, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

Kirsten3840J (talk) 16:49, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

The clarity of this article is very good, but there are a few details that you should look over concerning the style and grammar. I believe you can put all of the schools main information (mascot/ colors/ principal/ ect.) in a blue box in the upper right corner with a picture. Even though everything is not cited yet I believe that the information is accurate.

CBoring3840J (talk) 17:00, 1 November 2012 (UTC) Be sure to add citations to the article. Maybe find some more history about the school if possible. Clubs and Activities section: add a comma after failing. Maybe add some more clubs that are available to join? I would include titles and championships within the sport section since they go together. A comma should come after high school and the Lady Bucks baseball should be changed to softball. I find this very neat doing a page about your high school and also find it quite interesting that it costs money to play sports.