User talk:Jessica Gerlach

Deaconess Hospital (Evansville, Indiana)
Thanks for providing het copyright docs (I'm assuming it was you). I had to remove a bit of promotional and WP:POV language from this article. Permission to reuse content from the hospital's site does not mean that we can ignore Wikipedia's rules on how to write articles. Statements such "premier provider of health care services health care services to three states and 26 counties" and "top specialty doctors" are not acceptable without independent, reliable sources to show that those terms are valid, so I made minor changes. See WP:PEACOCK. I removed "We continue our mission of providing quality health care services with a compassionate and caring spirit to the community." completely. Reporting on the mission of the hospital is promotional, and it's not written in Wikipedia's voice. The article also needs WP:reliable sources (other than the hospital's webpage]]. Meters (talk) 17:18, 22 September 2014 (UTC)