User talk:Jessicabadcock/sandbox

Peer Review
I think you chose a really good article to contribute to as there is really not a lot of organization to the article currently. I'm interested to see if there are any differences due to sex. I'm not sure what your plan is but I think it would be nice if you made something like an introductory section along with the sections you're already planning to add. Jaybee625 (talk) 20:05, 22 October 2017 (UTC)


 * I was planning on leaving the section that was already in the article and maybe just expanding it slightly to have as an introductory section. Jessicabadcock (talk) 17:26, 29 October 2017 (UTC)