User talk:Jessicaferman/sandbox

Article Draft
Jessica, This is a great start, but your draft doesn't appear finished. Sources all look very good.JAirhart 12:57, 23 March 2018 (UTC)

Bailey's Peer Review
Great job with the citation, your draft looks great so far! Baileyryane (talk) 19:56, 27 March 2018 (UTC)

Megan's Peer Review
Nice job inserting a source into your draft. Your topic is very interesting and I will be interested to see the result. Megan warren613 (talk) 19:56, 27 March 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
You seem to have very good sources and a good beginning to your article. The only recommendations I would make is to make your draft more lengthy and to keep working on the points you want to make. Felicsmith (talk) 15:51, 3 April 2018 (UTC)