User talk:Jessicatung/sandbox

I think that this is a good synopsis for the novel, though the grammar needs some tweaking; also, maybe you can describe some key events/themes/messages from the novel as you continue to develop the article? Dobanla (talk) 06:21, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Yes, I know the grammar definite need to be fixed. I did the draft very quickly to put everything I want to included in the article first. Later on, I will organize it more and correct the grammar fro sure. Jessicatung (talk) 03:15, 12 March 2017 (UTC)

Hello!
Hey Jessica!

I think this is a great start about the connections between her book Adam and her personal life. If possible, as you continue to expand the summary of her book, maybe add some visuals from her work to enhance the article in a way. I also agree with Dobanla about including key points of why this book is impactful, not only to the reader of the article, but also in Schrag's experience as a cartoonist.

Looking forward to seeing the article evolve! Ciramya (talk) 06:13, 11 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your advice. I found it very helpful what you and Debanla said. I actually added more just now and will definitely try add more about why this book is so unique and what have influenced her for the story in the book. I also would love to add visuals and hopefully I can find some I can use! Jessicatung (talk) 03:15, 12 March 2017 (UTC)