User talk:Jessiekoral/sandbox

1. The first section of the article gives a nice summary of what's to come in the rest of the article. The article does a nice job at explaining all the different health effects of noise exposure - both physical and psychological. I was particularly impressed by more of the psychological effects of noise because we usually don't think about how significant noise exposure can cause stress, annoyance, etc. Therefore, I think it's great that this article has those sections. I was surprised that there wasn't a tinnitus section in the original article because it's so common nowadays, but Jessie will be adding a section on tinnitus to the article. The first sentence presents the topic in a very clear way since it includes both the physical and psychological effects of noise.

2. a. There doesn't need to be a comma in the very first sentence of the article. b. Jessie indicated that she will move the regulations section to the top. I would put it as the third section: after Health effects from Noise and Noise-induced hearing loss. c. Tinnitus is an auditory disorder characterized by the perception of a sound (ringing, chirping, buzzing, etc.)in the absence of an external sound source. d. The stress section includes information from the UK. Are there any studies you could find that were done in the US? e. The Cognitive Development section doesn't mention anything about how hearing loss effects language development. It only includes how speech and reading are affected. Maybe add a sentence or two about how children primarily learn language through hearing and if they have hearing loss it could cause major language delays.

3. ADDING A TINNITUS SECTION because tinnitus is the most common side-effect of significant noise exposure.

4. I can't think of anything I could add to my article from reviewing this article; however, I noticed that I will be adding similar information that's in the regulations section to my article. Specifically about noise exposure levels and duration limits (TWAs).