User talk:Jessieyz

THIS WAS A NEW USER IN FEBRUARY 2018
Please assist Victuallers (talk) 11:33, 23 February 2018 (UTC)

Loughborough University
Digital marketing assignment. Do experiment on your user page and in the "sandbox". You can find the link for the sandbox at the top of this page. Remember to sign in at the bottom of the wp:Loughborough University page. Remember that you have guides on "Learn".Here are a few extra links to pages you might find helpful:
 * Introduction and Getting started
 * Contributing to Wikipedia
 * The five pillars of Wikipedia
 * How to edit a page and How to develop articles
 * How to create your first article
 * Simplified Manual of Style

You may also want to complete the Wikipedia Adventure, an interactive tour that will help you learn the basics of editing Wikipedia. You can alsovisit the Teahouse to ask questions or seek help.

Please remember, Jessie, to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or, and a volunteer should respond shortly. Again, welcome! Victuallers (talk) 11:33, 23 February 2018 (UTC)

Original Synthesis
Hi. I have removed part of what you added to the Durex article and I wanted to explain why.

What you were adding is what is referred to on Wikipedia as Original Synthesis. That means you were adding content, and sourcing it (which is always a good thing), but only for the purposes of constructing a new point from those sources. That is; you were creating a point that wasn't in your sources, but could be made by combining your sources. This isn't permitted on Wikipedia. In your case you were explaining the manner of the company's marketing (source A) by attributing it to Chinese cultural attitudes (source B). You cannot combine sources in this manner to make your point. You need a source that already makes the connection between the two for you.

Thanks. -- Escape Orbit (Talk) 15:38, 15 March 2018 (UTC)