User talk:Jessnar812/Humberto Millán Salazar

Critique
The CPJ website says that 27 have been killed since 1992, but it also lists 4 more media workers and 33 more unconfirmed. How many were political vs. drugs? Look at the "Beats Covered by Victims" when you look at Mexico at the killed since 1992 page. The percentage is interesting. // Why did you include the section on drugs if it appears like it is a political killing? Since it is unknown at the present, you may want to write something that would introduce that it is an either or situation. // There are more internal and external links that you could create. // Use the REF tag name="X" /> citation tags to get ride of repeat citations. I did the RSF cite so that you could see how it was done. // In general, don't include time first because it bores the reader. Mostly, I stick to the who, what, where, when structure. When who is first, it captures the readers interest. Crtew (talk) 04:26, 27 October 2011 (UTC)