User talk:Jessolovely/sandbox3

Jessolovely is this going to be your main article contribution? Or do you plan to work on all three? It's up to you, but remember you only HAVE to do one :) don't forget to complete the 'Add a Citation' exercise to any of the articles you've added for yourself. Gardneca (talk) 01:53, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Yes this will be my main article contribution. I'm sorry I made 3. I really wasn't too sure what I wanted to do. Jessolovely (talk) 21:16, 2 April 2019 (UTC)

Dr.Gardner, or whoever is peer reviewing: I'm debating if I should add an image to create a visual of how the Philippines is divided into those 3 regions, and I am also debating if I should add a brief summary of the stories that I've listed...what do you think? Jessolovely (talk) 21:08, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Jessolovely I think adding visuals is always a good idea! Make sure to do the training for this week to add images so you can make sure any images you use are open-access. I also really like the idea of adding summaries of the stories, that will nicely expand your article. In the future, make sure to include my username when asking a question so I get a notification and see it sooner! Gardneca (talk) 07:23, 16 April 2019 (UTC)

peer review Visayas is slightly under represented. You could add short summaries of each of the stories mentioned. In the last sentence of Regional Philippine Mythology change had to have, present tense. Add citations to the claims in Regional Philippine Mythology introduction. There are lots are sources listed in the references, so additional information could be added to any of the existing sections, as well. Brittanylwatson (talk) 03:22, 19 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Brittanylwatson thanks for your helpful review and suggestions. Jessolovely I think you have some good directions to take here, especially the suggestion about adding short summaries of each of the stories. It's hard to give feedback right now because much of this is just a list. The organization is great, but you definitely want to bolster your contribution with some good content as well. Good research and outline so far, now write write write! Gardneca (talk) 04:03, 19 April 2019 (UTC)