User talk:Jfalgate

Your submission at Articles for creation: Towergate Insurance (January 29)
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KylieTastic (talk) 16:12, 29 January 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Towergate Insurance (February 4)
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LaMona (talk) 21:40, 4 February 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Towergate Insurance (March 6)
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SwisterTwister  talk  05:04, 6 March 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Towergate Insurance (March 24)
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 Onel 5969  TT me 12:36, 24 March 2016 (UTC)

Towergate
I've had a go at editing your draft - see what you think. I've also left a couple of comments you may wish to review, these can be seen if you go into editing view.

In general, I'd use Swinton Insurance as a template for style/info, not Aviva, as they are closer to your company (being smaller and a broker rather than a direct insurer)

Hope that helps! Mike1901 (talk) 15:16, 24 March 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Towergate Insurance has been accepted
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