User talk:Jfcreaghan

Good job overall in explaining the phenomenon of coarticulation, Jfcreaghan. You gave a clear and concise explanation of the topic.

It would be helpful for the reader to include a brief summary of the article's key points in the lead section.

There are many words throughout that should be linked to increase accessibility for people of different knowledge backgrounds or reading skill level. For example, in the lead section, it may be more accessible to students with various levels of knowledge if you link the word "phonological" to the phonology page on Wikipedia.

Under the history section, who are Menzerath and de Lacerda? It would helpful if you let readers know what expertise they have to be an authority on the subject. For example, are they linguists or cognitive psychologists?

Italics can be used more frequently throughout the put emphasis on facts for each paragraph. For example, "extent" and "direction of influence" under explanation and theory can be italicized for emphasis. This would make the page easier for students and the general public to read.Fchu6 (talk) 23:15, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (September 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sam Sailor was:

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-- Sam Sailor Talk! 06:21, 22 September 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, User:Jfcreaghan/sandbox


Hello, Jfcreaghan. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "sandbox".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing.  Onel 5969  TT me 22:14, 5 April 2016 (UTC)