User talk:Jfilm1/sandbox

This a nice contribution. You might include some visuals - photos or images of Malthus. I went through the first couple of paragraphs and made some stylistic changes. Try write in a more active voice. Also, see if you can remove words that don't add anything. By clicking on "view history" you can see what I started.Mcassell04 (talk) 17:27, 14 October 2017 (UTC)

The formatting is a little off. Cassell04 (talk) 16:08, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

Formatting the picture and table of contents Jfilm1 (talk) 01:49, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
 * . For the image, it was the fact that you had used [[File:...]] instead of just putting the image name after image. For the headers - we generally don't use level-1 headers (e.g. ) and we also don't put a section header before the opening paragraph (called the lead). If you want more help, change the help me-helped back into a help me, stop by the Teahouse, Wikipedia's live help channel, or the help desk to ask someone for assistance. Primefac (talk) 02:06, 26 October 2017 (UTC)