User talk:Jfirminger/sandbox

Overall, the page is well laid out and the headings transition smoothly. There was one inconsistency that I had noticed, which was the reference to J. Mary Taylor's name. Sometimes she is referred to as 'J. Mary' and other times she is referred to as 'J. Mary Taylor'. I liked that there was a section completely dedicated to her published works, something that we could include in our page as well. A final comment to make is that there is some repitition in the sentences starting with 'It was here that...'. Maybe you could consider another transition into the sentence.