User talk:Jfvrbes/sandbox

Hi Jess, Some of the gaps I noticed on your sandbox include the lack of sources and explanations. You could maybe try adding more sources to what you already have and finding more data from things such as case studies. It would also help make some things more clear if you give a brief description of the treatments you listed, just stating what they are or how they could help treat the paraphilia. Other than that, the topic sounds very interesting! Preyessanchez (talk) 04:16, 11 November 2019 (UTC)

Peer Edit
It says the 6 months didn't make it to the live page, maybe try rephrasing as necrophilia can be diagnosed after 6 months of recurring sexual urges with a corpse. The motives section seems well put together and concise, the statistics helpful for understanding the subject. I think throughout your edits, you mention a lack of necrophiliacs. Is there a significant amount of evidence that this is due to it being a rare condition, or lack of known necrophiliacs willing to be studied/for research purposes? For the treatment pages, since information is lacking, would a regular concise paragraph work in place of bullet points, to explore some ttreatments that were tried?

DCHWave (talk) 20:44, 17 November 2019 (UTC) David Hults